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Here comes my so long waited for analysis of “ The Final Price ” by Patricia . Mmmmm, what can I say? The sensual scenes in the novel are just about right , not too much detail approaching disgusting and yet not so little that you seem to fill the blank!! Just exactly what I like.
It looks to me girls as if the hero only know three words in his dictionary “ my , mine , and possession!!” heheheh! I don’t know about that , but they seem apparently his favourite ! I should have counted how many times he repeated those words in the story line like we used to do when the teacher repeat the same word again and again in school I guess !!
Nice story, but sorry to say this it was very typical M & B plot. I found one thing though original and seemed to spice up the story a little, this is when the hero brought his supposedly mistress to dinner while giving the heroine the impression that they were dining alone in order to surprise , annoy and ignite her jealousy and we know how that ironically backfired at him! Other than that it was sweet of him to defend her when she was morally attacked and when he seem to plead to be with her.
Of course it was also sweet of him to keep the ring but what I found sweeter is when he kept her clothes because divorcés usually keep wedding rings as me moa since it is small ,valuable and easy to hide away. But to keep the clothes and risk others pitying you and feel sorry that you didn’t move on? That really showed how much he cared.
Some things though I think the author should have thought of them to make the story more believable. First , I don’t think that when there is a fourteen years old girl - no matter how enchanting she was- and a mature available woman, a guy would limit himself to accompanying the girl without playing around with the other. And this would give more justification to the unreasonable jealousy of the other women.
Secondly, I don’t think that a 2 year old kid seeing his mom being kissed by a stranger for the first time that he would be mesmerize by it and say “ Nice kiss”. He would be jealous as hell or shocked or whatever natural reaction there is to this situation.
Thirdly, the grandfather reason for not interfering earlier to salvage the relationship is ridiculous!! If you were afraid that your enemies are after your granddaughter you wouldn’t have her raised in Greece in the first place and our story would not happen ! I think if he said he gave her time to grow up that would sound more realistic.
I don’t know how the hero still kept his friendship with the other woman if he thought the whole accident was fishy. In reality he wouldn’t think of befriending her afterwards if he was suspicious.
To be divorced and not check if the wife is pregnant!! That is so stupid and highlight clearly how our Islamic religion is fair to us women. A woman can’t be divorced before she had her period checked or so I believe!!
I will stop now I almost finished a spreadsheet writing this ! I understand if you don’t have the time to read it all but I wrote it anyway. I am going to read Warda’s recommendation next although I am not sure when I will finish . You will find out as soon as I write my opinions anyhow
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09-10-08, 05:45 PM
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