loooove this poem

amazing

subject , words , language , expression realy every thing

i hope alot from the person

good luck in the compatition

hello
very nice poem
I like it ^^

the title is very nice
and the subject is new
the language and poetical devices is very good
I like your expression
but in the next time try to balance your words to become appropriate
and delete the words that are useless
to give more expression in a few words

the poem is really nice
good luck ^^

Hello

A very beautiful poem

Style of language is beautiful and harmonious

This strange and beautiful

Success of the rider always