The second poem short season بقلم park hae in

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amaaaaaaaaaaazing
my evaluation is
10
its subject is just too good

excellent
I like it soooooo much the topic is perfect
I give it 9.5

good luck everybody.....:)

Short season comes out to be childhood> good subject for your poem.
There are words in the poem you should have cancelled to be perfect ex. let me rephrase it for you and compair

Enchanted place where colors are brighter
Morning more fragrant and air softer
It's magic in life
When the world seems fair
And no meaning for despair
It's magic in life
Where life is rainbow and sky glow
Colors are brighter and air softer
Carry it with you
You'll never be old
Short season in life is childhood

rate 8/10